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So I was out clubbing this weekend with my brother and a few friends, today I'm still hung over ... Guess I drank a "little" too much...We ended up at some random girl's place we met at the train on the way back home, she offered us wine and whiskey lol, I can tell you that doesn't blend very well, had puke and got stuck in the toilet pretty much rest of the night lol.
Anyway I woke up today and went out to buy some groceries and my god the weather is freaking awesome here in Stockholm right now, sun is shining and that made me feel a lot better, so i got back home and started to make some music since not really fit for playing starcraft right now as im still a bit shaky lol....
If you like trance have a listen and give me some feedback/or constructive criticism, I'm still not very good at producing but i feel like i've made some major improvements lately:
http://soundcloud.com/altitude08/alexander-healy-trapped
Enjoy!
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what do you want feedback about then?
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On April 26 2011 00:38 Rotodyne wrote: Nice song, sounds good.
Thanks!
Full version: http://soundcloud.com/altitude08/alexander-healy-trapped
On April 26 2011 00:57 Starparty wrote: what do you want feedback about then?
Well anything really, like if some instrument is too loud etc or anything that comes to mind when listening =)
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I'm in no position to give do anything else but to encourage the artist and ask him to keep this up.
any other tracks ? :D
I absolutely dig the passive 5:02-6:02 leads into the next part so well.
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On April 26 2011 02:51 Iplaythings wrote:I'm in no position to give do anything else but to encourage the artist and ask him to keep this up. any other tracks ? :D I absolutely dig the passive 5:02-6:02 leads into the next part so well.
well been a long time since i actually finished a track, i got a couple on my soundcloud but they're mostly old
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On April 26 2011 03:38 WindOw wrote:Show nested quote +On April 26 2011 02:51 Iplaythings wrote:I'm in no position to give do anything else but to encourage the artist and ask him to keep this up. any other tracks ? :D I absolutely dig the passive 5:02-6:02 leads into the next part so well. well been a long time since i actually finished a track, i got a couple on my soundcloud but they're mostly old Well if you judge them as good as this one I cant do anything but wanting to try em out atlest.
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haha noo i have some stuff that there's potential in but i never bothered to finish them, i think this is my best track so far to be honest... I put effort in it
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On April 26 2011 03:45 WindOw wrote:haha noo i have some stuff that there's potential in but i never bothered to finish them, i think this is my best track so far to be honest... I put effort in it Sad, cus this really is some good stuff, been listening to it for some hours now (not flattering, I do this everytime I find a track i really like)
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Okay Thanks alot :D i appreciate it ...! I have a mastered, final edit on the way now can link u 192kbps version when its up
If i get more good feedback ill probably keep on throwing out tracks it's whats gets me in the mood for creating more stuff so once again thx alot!
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you kind of need to be specific with what you want feedback on or it might either end up being too much to take in or you might be getting comments on stuff you dont want.
Lets say you ask for feedback meaning you want some production tips, but instead someone replies with "you should change the melody". Some production tips would mean you could push the track quality, but changing the melody is like changing your art. Thats different critisism that doesnt even play in the same field.
I think you should keep doing your thing and combine it with reference listening to your favourite tracks. Unless you specify what you want feedback about im not gonna go into any specifics. Partly because im not tiesto myself, but also because its subjective and i think it mostly brings negative attitude which is something aspiring artists gets enough of anyway. After all you did your track exactly the way you wanted it, and if the listener likes it or not is up to him/her.
If you didnt get the track to sound like you wanted though, then mabye i can give you some pointers on how to get there. If you give me specifics, that is
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thats very true I guess
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Calgary25951 Posts
I listened to this yesterday but forgot to make a comment. You're the guy who posted past blogs on making trance music, right? If so, I've really enjoyed all the tracks I've heard you make. My only criticism is they are like 5% too generic, which I actually have no problem with because this style of music is my favourite.
Great work.
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Thanks chill =) And yeah..i made few posts back about it . I'm trying to work on the dynamics a bit more so it doesn't sound all to generic ~~ Might add some vocals to help out with that.
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Just listened to this. I really like this trance track! What tools did you use?
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On April 28 2011 02:56 Trozz wrote: Just listened to this. I really like this trance track! What tools did you use?
Thanks ^^ Propellerheads Reason 4.0
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