Ridicule, misery, darkness - pain
Most of my efforts - in vain
Babble about unknown things - insane
My insides feel empty - slain
My legs feel tied down - chain
Existence is suffering - bane
Everything is grey - plain
Humidity on my face - rain
Torment is the only thing that I can - gain
Flashing lights in front of me - a train

_fool

Netherlands681 Posts

November 22 2018 10:02 GMT

Rated 2/5.

You really should put the answers to the riddles in a + Show Spoiler +

spoiler

. This is no fun.

Chef

10810 Posts

November 22 2018 13:42 GMT

Are you feeling sad, or is this only creative?

JimmyJRaynor

Canada17263 Posts

November 22 2018 14:25 GMT

"they say that Raven.. is the Flock's guide... down alienation's barren path... but the truth is... i walk alone... quote the Raven ... WCW United States Champion .... forever more".

Ikirouta

Finland739 Posts

November 22 2018 14:48 GMT

On November 22 2018 22:42 Chef wrote:
Are you feeling sad, or is this only creative?

A little bit from column a, a little bit from column b.

JimmyJRaynor

Canada17263 Posts

November 22 2018 18:39 GMT

On November 22 2018 19:02 _fool wrote:
Rated 2/5.

5 stars
i'm a big mark for sad speeches...what can i say ... i'm a big scot levy mark.

"Diamond Dallas Page .... I'm going to make you feel my pain"

seriosity

United States214 Posts

November 24 2018 06:47 GMT

ASL5 champion - Rain

Ikirouta

Finland739 Posts

November 24 2018 07:14 GMT

On November 24 2018 15:47 seriosity wrote:
ASL5 champion - Rain

I hate that I laughed at this.

Chairman Ray

United States11903 Posts

November 24 2018 08:21 GMT

prosatan

Romania8520 Posts

December 04 2018 21:52 GMT

#10

On November 24 2018 15:47 seriosity wrote:
ASL5 champion - Rain

Great comment sir !!

BorisBeast

United Kingdom3 Posts

November 19 2020 20:42 GMT

#11

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