A rough day.

Ikirouta

Finland739 Posts

March 05 2018 23:46 GMT

I feel beaten and rugged
my scarabs - they only bugged
the game of starcraft can be demanding
its about exectuion and understanding
I feel empty and defeated
like my geysers - I've depleated
I feel pain in all of my joints
when people took many of my ladder points

TelecoM

United States10695 Posts

March 06 2018 02:57 GMT

Really great poem, feel better and keep fighting ! 5/5

DSK

England1110 Posts

March 06 2018 16:53 GMT

The feels are swelling in me now. ikirouta FIGHTING!.

JimmyJRaynor

Canada17267 Posts

March 06 2018 18:34 GMT

they say that Raven is the flock's guide...
down alienation's barren path....
the truth is ....
i walk alone...
quote the raven....
nevermore.

Starlightsun

United States1405 Posts

March 06 2018 19:47 GMT

Although your MMR is sinking
It makes a good excuse for drinking.
So take a break and have some beers,
And later, drink opponent's tears.

Gorgonoth

United States468 Posts

March 08 2018 03:39 GMT

Cool poem, but I couldnt help thinking that if you used more punctuation it would be even better 5/5

AKnopf

Germany259 Posts

March 09 2018 11:47 GMT

to rage quit is the only way
do not feel obliged to stay
'live to fight another day'
that is what the wise men say

if you're blue or if you're gay
that is not for me to sway
to feeling bad you should say 'nay'
or else your days might end up grey

DeNikSSB

United States135 Posts

March 10 2018 01:33 GMT

I can't write poems to save my life so I'll make a more serious post here.

I don't know you, you don't know me. But if you ever wanna talk, I'm here

AKnopf

Germany259 Posts

March 10 2018 16:18 GMT

I don't know if you meant me or Ikirouta, so I will just assum you meant me.

I'm fine, thanks! I guess my poem turned out a bit darker than intended. But as you can probably understand, it's quite hard to write poems (especially when it's not your mother tongue and everything rymes with everything). So there is that.

Thanks for your more serious post though - appreciated!

DeNikSSB

United States135 Posts

March 10 2018 20:37 GMT

#10

On March 11 2018 01:18 AKnopf wrote:
I don't know if you meant me or Ikirouta, so I will just assum you meant me.

I'm fine, thanks! I guess my poem turned out a bit darker than intended. But as you can probably understand, it's quite hard to write poems (especially when it's not your mother tongue and everything rymes with everything). So there is that.

Thanks for your more serious post though - appreciated!

I originally intended it for Ikirouta, but looking back this applies to you as well

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