Sorry Reptilia and Peeano for not remembering your names >_< But shoutouts to you as well for the suggestions!
I tried to do a bit more future sight analysis while also incorporating pauses into commentary to gather my thoughts. Hope I've improved, even if just a tiny bit. Let me know what you think!
EDIT: GGzerG has recently suggested i stream to Afreeca. I do stream occasionally to twitch, but don't want to stream my commentary until I have enough followers and support to take it there. If I get enough interest in watching a livestream of my commentary I will gladly do it c: